This is definately one of my favorite Peter Pan fanfics!! :D Fantastic story, thanks for a great read!

Emma <3

LOVED IT!

YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER EVER!, Thanks, so much for this story, it was better than i could ever have imagined! have you read twilight, you were so good at peter pan, i know you could work your magic on twilight, i was so worried this would be another fanfic written by someone whos only seen the movies, but i can tell you really have read the book like i have, and truly come to know the characters, thanks soo much for this amazing fanfic!
your faithful reader

I must say I am rather disappointed. The beginning of your story had me captivated with your masterful writing; for some reason I adore the idea of young, unconventional Wendy working in a musty old bookshop in early-twentieth century London.

But as I read further, I simply could not reconcile to the sexual tensions and soap-opera-like drama in your later chapters. Realistically speaking, Peter and Wendy will naturally feel sexually attracted to one another, but I thought that you let that attraction take precedence over their past sweet, innocent love, which was primarily based on the compatibility of their personalities (Peter, the courageous, wild, but immature and arrogant boy; and Wendy, similarly adventurous and brave, but wiser and more mature, with motherly tendencies). In other words, I wish you could have emphasized the character traits (both strengths AND flaws) that they found attractive in one another rather than mere physical comeliness.

My last bit of criticism is purely subjective, and based only on personal preference. On principle, I usually dislike of fics that have Wendy join Peter in Neverland forever. One of the main themes I drew from the book and movie is that while growing up may not be as fun as living in a child's "Never-never land", the sweetest joys in life come only with time and age. Thus, I disapprove of the way Wendy regrets her decision to leave Peter--that decision was what made me respect her as a character, and I prefer that she look upon with reminiscent wistfulness rather than remorse. On the other hand, as much as I love Peter, I cannot forgive him for his cowardly decision to give up Wendy in order to escape responsibility and disappointment. In the case of your story, making Peter and Wendy live blissfully in Neverland while also experiencing all the emotional and physical delights of adulthood is, to me, idealistically trying to unite two impossibly distant worlds for the sake of a couple's "happily ever after".

For some reason, throughout the whole first chapter, Bennet's name seems to be missing.

"What on earth will think of me..."
and
"she made up an excuse to who took one look at her white face..." Yes, among others.

It's easy enough to figure out where it's supposed to be, but it's still not there. A glitch or something, perhaps?

I LOVE IT!
I was gonna say you must have been through or with someone in child birth but i read your Update on your profile. Sorry to hear about you youngest, that's a pain.
I LOVED every second of it. The chapters took about an hour to read a piece and with my 2yr old and 5mo old it took at least a month to read but it was completely worth it!! WOW!
~Crystal

Wow...I have no words. This has to be one of the best pieces of Fanfiction I have ever read. Thank you for posting this, it was a joy. I loved every minute of it! =^_^=

wow, thats all i can really say.

*squishes fic in its happy places*

I have spent most of today reading this story and enjoying it very, very much. I love More Mature!Wendy and Older!Peter and the mystery you're hinting at with the book and Captain Aramis and all. It's a delight to read except for a few punctuation things.

Storywise, this is top notch.

ohh my gosh i loved that story to death! amazing writing skills!

Very cute! I loved it!

What a beautiful story! I can't understand why it took me so long to find it. I had almost given up on finding a truly good PP fiction. I'm glad I didn't! I love the magic that you have weaved into the story! I enjoyed the way you managed to keep them in character. Their love is so believable, so romantic! And such a happy ending! Well done! Thankyou for such a lovely story!

Hook, Line and sinker. You got me pulled in. This was incrediable and I was happy to read this. I was surprise that some of the story made me thought of the movie, Princess Bride, but that's how I thought Peter and Wendy would be. I am happy how this story turned out and it was such a pleasure to read. I hope that you do more amazing work like this one because I have only one word to say about this story, : Unforgettable.

hey omgh it was so awesome. i loved the story! it was cute that he kept calling her sweetness and saying she was beautiful but i have one question.. so i guess she left her family and friends forever then? or will that guy mr bennett tell them that she is with her love or something like that. Also i would have thought that they would go back to london just to let her family see the baby. or bring the boys (like her brothers) to see the baby. or like for them to like live in london and him come back often to neverland to see how tings are or maybe the last idea wouldnt work but i was hoping kinda that her family would see the baby. anyways it was really good! i enjoyed it!