Nice character study. It really captures the personalities of everyone involved.

This is really interesting.

This was fun to read. I really like the miniskirt comment... XD Typical Roy... You described Riza really well. Go Royai!

Hahaha, I loveed this bit:

"The report pile seemed to defy the law of equivalent exchange since Roy worked endlessly at it, but had never gotten anything back from it"

Well done!

hello. that was a little random but i loved the I was just thinking that you’d command more respect in a miniskirt,” thing. that was funny

so beautiful...

..i seem to be running across more and more of the cloyingly sweet royai fics. and this is not one of them. i also appreciate the miniskirt comment...heheh. totally in character Roy and Riza. i want to congratulate you.

ja ne, and keep writing,

kinokokichigai

lovely! absolutely lovely! can't wait for the next chapter!

That was truly great. Very nice how you wrote so accurately about Riza through Roy's eyes. Awesome writing _

OMG! This is... this is...perfect.

I swear this is like the most accurate description of Riza EVER. You Rock!