A great story. Very good.

aww, perfect. Not mushy or slashy. And I love how you reinterpreted Jake's true love kiss to reflect the love he had for his brother.

Really great, nice descriptions and such. However, I didn't think it was a fanfic so much as just your thoughts on what people were thinking and what actually happened. It was great, though, and I guess, in a way, it was a fanfic-But I can't say that I'm especially pleased. I was more looking forward to something new and different. I half-expected a different ending-Maybe Will really died? Or something else that turned it completely askew?

Not trying to be rude, a favorite, nonetheless. A fan of brotherly moments? You should try some Supernatural! Haha! I will look forward to reading other things by you. Here's to better, more productive future works to come!

I enjoyed this story very much. The end scene with the Queen was my favorite part, and I couldn't blame her for wanting to make Will hers...LOL. I was thinking the same thing! Very good descriptions of what the characters were thinking...especially the end where Jake and Will have their 'bonding' moment.

thanks for a great read!

Very nice.