I love this mini-short story! It was interesting and hilarious!

haha, that was funny... anyways i think i'll go read some of your friends other storys... update yours soon!! your friends a great writer... you both should write on fictionpress.. i have an account there its called dreamer-of-silver-skys UPDATE WFE

**Ariel**

Wowo thats really cute I like it!

oh i love it! tell Chaotic Good i love it please! i love all of her work!

alex

I love Tala/Vega moments like these, when they're not trying to kill each other(lol). But if possible could you please ask Chaotic Good to write more short stories with Tala/Vega, I keep checking to see if Dark Empress Rising is updated but I think from lack of reviews she stopped updating, but their my favorite couple so I love reading about them. I also like how she threw in Farrel for some rivalry, and the whole CPR thing was great. Oh and of course I love WFE too, it's my favorite fanfic; but this is definitely my favorite short story. Please keep writing, both of you.

Aw! Lot's of fluffy-ness! Me loved it!

That was very good! I love the Tala/Vega moments! Oh, and thanks for the pictures! They were great!

That was so sweet! Tala and Vega are my favorite couple, it's nice to see them like this. Tell Chaotic Good I love her writing just as much as I love yours. Oh, and that's a lot, but I'm sure you knew that.

Wow man, that's perfect XD The ending part is the best! *repeats the alterted version of Jack and Jill*

I think maybe I should go pester your friend soon XP

*waves* I'm outty!

I enjoyed this short, it was very funny. I'd have to say my favorite part is when Tala held his breath and and asked Vega to show him how CPR is done, and she punches him in the gut. XD
As I've said in some of my reviews for WFE, Tala and Vega make an interesting couple.

Your friend is a good writer, tell her to keep up the good work.

^__^ wonderful story i love Vega/Tala plz tell ur friend thank you for writing this it's truly wonderful!

Your friend is a very skilled author, like you. I liked this little piece a lot. Lots of humor, it had Farrel (and his dense innocence, I love that cat of yours) and some fluff as well.

Your friend seems to do Tala and Vega slightly differently from you, but that's not a bad thing. And besides, everyone have their own different take on a character.

They get along, for once, and I think they're sweet. Maybe Tala is afraid to lose her to the "Fleabag"?

Vega giving Tala mouth to mouth... If she had done it... I'd want to see his reaction to it!

I did expect a kiss (a real kiss), but maybe she didn't want to mess with your storyline too much? Still, it was a cute little interlude, and a nice piece of writing.

lol, that is funny!! i couldnt stop laughing!! it was good and i love the Wishing for Eternity series so far! keep up the good work!