wow,that poem wuz so touching (sniff,sniff) it wuz so good,that the writers shoulda put dat into da show! yea,i know that wuz stupid,but your poem is 1 of da best out there,no lie gurl! chu got talent,hell,you even made it rhyme 2! now 'that',is hard! i give you your props gurl!

^_~.
Luv: Mel20y

Hmmm, very depressing and poignant. This story takes a good look at what Melfina might've been feeling at that time and describes it wonderfully. It's a terrific character piece. Thank you for writing and posting it here.

luved it!!

Aww... *sniff* You did a very good job of showing the emotions!

OHHH!!! That was soooooooo cute!!! And soooooooooo sad!!! I reallllllly loved it!!! Soooooooooo sorry for allllllllll the lettttttttttttters! I'mmmmmmmmmmmmmm a bitttttttttt hhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyypppppppppppeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrr right nowwwwww!!!!!!!! But pppppppppplease don'tttt beeeee annnnoyed!!! (OOOOOKKKKKKK!!!!! That was a misssss spel:)!!!)Buttttttt please keeeeep writinggggg!!!!! THANKS!!!!!

Wow. Just..wow.

aaaaaw...i see you are back! great poem, it really captures emtotions well. i am glad bounty hunted is goign to be out! ^_^ ~^0^