Cool stuff. But... Grandchild of Caleb? Better you make a hero some ordinary strange guy.

Nice

yo!this is one of the best stories i ever read but anyway u should have kept going on it it was an great story

That was just fuckin great.
It really fully amused me for the 40min
it took 2 read it.
2bad most people just don't know blood,
because this is very good.

Goddamn

that

was

very

cool

!

wow

Dude, one word and ONE ONLY DAMMIT! you get no more word's than ONE! and yet, that word shall be, Sweet.

Hey, I've never really heard anything about blood, but this story was great, I didn't have to know much about blood. I just wish it was little longer but tahts me, great job, I hope to see more of your work around.

Bada Bing! Bada Boom! That was amazing! When sophia got captured by the spider, for some reason, the word "!" rang through my head... maybe it was something etheral, or maybe it had something to do with the fact i finished reading it at around 3 in the morning! But I have never seen anything like it! I smell a seqal, that was DEFINANTLY what you would call a cliffhanger! I wish i could do something like that... but i guess my nack is in comedy. Well, tell me if you decide to make another! Such Detail, how was THAT done? Huh?

ok well i just finished the story...i must be completely honest...is was great up until the end...but still it was a good story

i like this story so far but i'm only half way done with it

Beautiful, just beautiful. I believe it has everything one could ask for in a fic. You don't even need to know the background to read this story. If anything, it's a bit boring at the beginning, but then it really picks up!

Great story. Follows Blood's storyline quite well, without being just a rip-off or a mindless pseudo-sequel. Nice open, surprising ending.

I think this is the best blood fan-fic ever written!

This story is a masterpeice. I certainly don't want to take away from the overall wonderfulness (now it's a word, lol), but I find the whole concept of Caleb getting into all this trouble over a girl extremely disturbing. I sure hope I don't end up like that... if this weren't based around an already existing storyline, it would make a great novel, and I mean that. It certainly seems long enough, lol.