The summary and wording could use some touching up, and it bothered me how much Ona wallowed in self-missery about Emery practically every time Al did anything, but as a whole I really enjoyed this story xD loved Ed. Also LOVED the fact that Roy became fuhrer, and it was hilarious when Ed was like: "Oh ya, I worked under him when he was just a colonel" lol ^.^ (btw this story MAY be a little worse than HKISA, but they both were pretty good reads!)

Wow, that was so good. I was suprised at the quality since I tend to be prejudiced against 1st person fics. Nice job.

HAPPY TEARS! Ok, I'm hopelessly addicted. But, seriously, very very good. Reading has never made me cry. I'm just one of those unemotional people. But, damned if you didn't make me all misty eyed! ::happy cry::

I think the hometown can be spelled Risembool or Resembool. ;)

I love your stories and I hope you will make more of this. It makes me so... moved! Can't wait for more of your stories. I love the plot, the feeling and emotion in it. It's so good to read. Thanks for sharing this with us. *gives a big bag of chocolate chips cookies for everyone*

PS: Adding this to Fav. Stories List.

THE 2nd BEST STORY EVER!Sorry,but Freanch-fri-freak beat you there.That story was better by only a little so dont be mad!Um one thing you left out the coolness of Winry's on!You know that thing is cool!I wonder if Ed has gotten some kind of brain damage from it?HeHe.If you ever make another story with Winry in it..PUT HER WENCH IN IT OR ILL SEND MY EVIL FLASHLIGHTS,CANDYCORN,or MARSHMELLOWS!Wait..I have a better idea!ILL SEND THEM ALL!MUHAHAHAHAHA!Wait I cant my invisable friend Nelly the huge,mutated marshmello/candycorn/flashlight will be mad...so...Ill send Neko-sama my Benie Baby of Doom!She will put a cuse on you that will make you cough for no reason.Bye!

-Flashlight Maniac

OMG! You made another story. I hope it's like your last one. Emotional and all that stuff. :3

This started out as a great and original story. The emotions you described were perfect, but then it got a little boring and too emotional. Probably just me. I still love the story though. Great work!

This is a wonderful story, why hasn't anyone reviewed!