The last line was really sweet. :)

Izumi was really a mother figure to them in a lot of ways. You did a good job conveying her tough side and her softer side here. Well done!

*With tears in big sparkled eyes* I Loved this! beign a rather big Izumi and Al Fan I think you captured their personalities wonderfuly! Beautifuly written too! *Grins as she understood the Japanese in it* it's a good movie btw...even if Izumi isnt in it *sigh* v.v; More! XD

this is a very touching fanfic...it was really well done...the ending was very beautiful :D

i'm gonna cry. you killed Izumi.. well i did too in my story "I'm Sory" but thats not the point. It's a good story and i respect it. Izumi will live on!