Oh my gosh, I burst out laughing! Hilarious!

"I'm a pirate, not a Catholic."
That was great! Ahahaha! That was great! I looved the last line!

awesome!! hehehe...poor Will...

XD awesome. just pure awesome XD

HAHAHA! The last bit made me laugh so much! 'Couldn't Jack at least give him back his pants?' Where's Elizabeth? Not that I mind if you got rid of her. 'Has he ever had a hat as faithful and loyal as me own hat was?' It sounds like a dog! It was so funny!

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lol!

Aw, poor Will, but ya know something? I would give a ton of money to see such sexy legs.

OMG!! Your last line was HALARIOUS!! (I'm having a bad spelling moment, excuse me if I spell something wrong) But, w/e, This is so going to my favs!
(chants) more, more, more.
Jack's hat, RIP.
(Takes off own hat)

"I'm a pirate, not a Catholic."

hahah love that line

The last sentence made me laugh out loud. Briliant litle ficlet, my compliments.

That was hilarious! Your last line made me burst out laughing. This goes to show that a story doesn't have to be long to be good - excellent job, though I would have loved to know how Will lost that hat!

hey i loved the story i laughed so hard and i hope u continue this story! its on my favorites!

hey, this story was AMAZINGLY funny. i loved how Jack was like.. can't hear you! lol i actuallu laughed out loud. Yea, seriously, out loud. Write more i love your stories!

oh my...lol

HAHAHAHAHA! Very fun mental images! ^-^