kawaii

Oh no.. It seems very incomplete.. But such a great storyline that it would be a shame if you don't add more to it.. I hope you work on this more.♥

This is a gorgeous piece of work. I bit fluffy, but not out-of-character. It should be placed in the 'Humour' category though, but anyways-it's lovely.

No grammar errors that I can see, the plot is great!

Thank you for posting this wonderful piece of work-it sincerely brightened my day a little, platonic GaaraTemari is always a treat.

lol haha me love strawberries^^ they rock! lol it was cute i dont no why u put it as suspence it was more like a slight humor anyway it was kawaii i gotta add to faves cuz it talks bout 1 of my fave couple *sibling and romance* from nruto and it has strawberries in them^^ yeay strawberries!

Hm, my mouth is probably going to kill me, too!

O. That's kina funny. Realy funny. :)

I just realized I'm starting to like the idea of Temari Gaara incest. Oh gods, save us all. *Faves*

Gaara is an animal. *grins*

it's so cute! nice!

Subtle Sandcest, but still quite amazing. I love strawberries, and this just increased my love for it.

kawaii! >_

Cute...^-^

XD! I love it when Gaara confuses his siblings like that.

Ahh...you have relieved my boredom today! I was just rereading your fic, actually, Critical Point (the one I said I probably WOULDN'T reread XD) and I finished with it, and went to check my mail.

Amazingly, 12 new messages were there! All of them were author alerts from you, so I decided to go in and scour things to my tastes (sandnin centric - I am SO obsessed)

Anyways. Neat story. Very cute. I normally don't like GaaTem, either. I prefer KankyGaa (x33!!)