Aahh, kawaii! Very nice little story. All in character and everything! Thanks for writing good fan fiction! It can be so hard to find!

Cute little scene with Konzen and Goku. ^^ The way you brought real people into it was interesting, though in the timeframe this is in, Jimmie Hendrix adn Adolf Hitler wouldn't have been born. That's a couple thousand years later, considering the time that they're all in heaven is about 300 BC. That's only if you look at the actual legend though.

All in all a sweet fic. I enjoyed it.
-Windy

Cute. Sweet. ^_^

^o^ Love it

Aww that was nice it's a cute little fic that made me squeal in the middle of class ^_^;That got a bunch of stares...