excellent

that was great keep it up

wow that chapter was great i love it and i am happy that you updated. good job!

Please let it have a happy ending. actually please let all your stories have a happy ending PLEASE.

anyway i loved this chapter like all the other chapters. I also love the other stories and there chaopters too.

so keep up the good work on all you stories and i hope you update them all again soon.

really really good chapter thanks for updating

That's where you left it?! There could be so much more to that conversation. I don't know what you have planned but this is the perfect opportunity for Jesse to cave to his fears and tell her about Juliet. (Calm down) ok. I'm ok. This is a really good story. I know you have your own ideas and I want to hear them...I just get carried away. Good job.

Ok, you've held up my Christmas Eve morning. I had to finish reading. The party was great. Your characterization is getting better. Lexa there, spying on Adam...very interesting. Where's that going? Their time together was beautiful. But it is the morning after and Brennan doesn't know yet, but Shal does. You haven't posted to this in about a month...don't keep me waiting. Merry Christmas.

I liked the date and the lead up. I'm glad Jesse is being straight forward with her. The little spill at the end was so cute and their reactions were perfect...first silence then laughter. Good job.

Nice. I liked the girls' plan to get them together. I'm not so happy about Brennan and Jesse at odds. Brennan redeemed himself in the end, though. What will Jesse do now?

I think this chapter was better than the first. You took it slower and explained the feelings more. Remember, don't skip details. I really liked the way everyone is aware of her need to give in to not be abused more. This was very nicely done.

Very nice start to this story. Brennan's being awfully harsh, I think. Jesse's submission is understandable as he still really is hurting. I think Adam sees the healing potential. Good job.

ok well u already know what i think of it.but ill say it again, i love it its brilliant.

you know how long that took me to read like an hour or so and i copied and pasted it into microsoft word to see how many pages it was and it was 41 pages that is so so so so so long. i loved it though but it may have been better if it was like 3 parts in three chapters.

hm...cute story...but ...Galena? the name is kinda interesting...PG rated for sure

too sweet, something is bound to happen soon... something bad... *shudder*

sorry, my pessimistic side is getting the best of me.

=)