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Jared Someone
2009-09-07 . chapter 9
Well
i think u should keep going
but it really depends if your motivated to write it
you love Roxas and Namine fanfics
and its funny to see that there is none in here
but if its going to be a hassle
than end it in one last chapter
i always say
if its going to be a hassle to write it, then don't
writing isn't like school work
writing is something you do that you enjoy
if you don't enjoy it, then don't do it
i would personally love it if you continued
but it all comes down to this
would u enjoy writing it?
Jared Someone
kira553
2009-08-21 . chapter 6
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kira553
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
i think its time that you let everyone know about sora's..perdicament. have them enter school with sora's condition only getting worse, even with the help of the doctors stuff. then have him go through the whole coughing up blood scene but while sitting at the table wth his friends. when they start to take him to the nurses office(pretty much everyone or only kairi) and on the way sora wil stop and take kairi out of hearing range of everyone else. he wil then procede to tell her slowly about whats really wrong with him and then he will finally show her what his aunts have done to him. have him take off his shirt and kairi will see the scars on sora's chest. i believe that is the point where you can carry this story on just as well as you did before.
If you could please respond to this,i would be very happy.My hotmail is please contact me when you have the time. OH! And good luck with the story!
omg42
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
keep going
what492
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
keep going
gb243
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
keep going
kira553
2009-08-16 . chapter 9
i have 2 words for you









KEEP GOING!
kairitheseventhprincessofheart
2009-07-08 . chapter 9
yes the show should go on! it better! you cannot just end it right here!

...really good by the way :)
Jalyn
2009-05-23 . chapter 9
Great story! The show defently should go on =]
I wana to find out what's sora is going to do about his sudden relization ^.^
hmm with the rikai thing I don't want riku to be alone but sora kairi should defs be together mab u could bring xion into it for riku that be awesome but that just my little opinion x]. love it and hope u continue it =DD
crazykhsokaifan
2009-03-19 . chapter 9
It was awesome. Period.
Eragonmetal6
2008-11-06 . chapter 9
Dude, keep this story going. i know its been almost two years and all, but at least finish this before starting the next one.
.Only.Lotte.
2008-10-21 . chapter 9
Yeah, I would like it if 'the show went on' as you have it.
It's an interesting storyline idea, I'd like to see what happens next, even if it does take you 1 month updates, I'll keep a lookout.

...Just so you know. :)

::Lotte::
Eragonmetal6
2008-08-02 . chapter 9
very good! please keep it up
jhvh777
2008-05-27 . chapter 9
I really like this story and was wondering if you were going to update it. ^_^
Si-Sidera
2008-03-09 . chapter 9
I thought this cap. was pretty good, but something dramatic needs to happen soon int he story. So, if you are thiunking of continuing, go ahead!1
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