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jhvh777
2008-05-27
ch 9,
abuseI really like this story and was wondering if you were going to update it. ^_^
LookintomyBlueyedDestiny
2008-03-09
ch 9,
abuseI thought this cap. was pretty good, but something dramatic needs to happen soon int he story. So, if you are thiunking of continuing, go ahead!1
sasusaku4life
2008-02-09
ch 8,
abuseomg look i know you might know this and tired of hearing this, but damn you gotta keep up this writing...I know that you might not update ever...but just to let you know theres people who are gonna read this. and be like damn why did this person stop and think at the end that she was that good now its been 2yrs maybe ^^;; i donno and KH 3 is coming out soon so maybe you would get inspired to keep writing :) who knows ^^
killerbunbun
2008-01-26
ch 9,
abuseI need some more...
this was getting really good...
yet i'm guessing you don't even remember what u where writing anymore...
so meh...
enjoy
Your Midnight Lullaby
2008-01-15
ch 9,
abuseOMG Write more!
D':
House and Kingdom hearts make me happy!
it would be so dramtic if kairi gets beatten by Riku so bad she ends up in the hosiptal in a coma :D They don't think she would make it! >.< DRAMA!
leaping.lizards330
2008-01-05
ch 7,
abusePlease continue this story! I know you are probably sick of hearing that but COME ON! This is the very first fanfic I've put on my favorites. I'd like to see it get finished!! Thanks
Gothicgirl2.0
2007-10-15
ch 9, anon.
abuseYES CONTINUE PLEASE ! this is such an awsome story to let it die on this one spot and I want to know what will happen next. SO CONTINUE


SEE YA

Gothicgirl2.0
Stygian Styx
2007-09-28
ch 9,
abusethis is a great story, I think you did a great job with the characters (while most people use random OC's, adding chaos and conusment to the mixture, you put in people from movies and TV shows, making it almost exactly like the KH series. you even managed to keep them from being OOC. I think you should continue the story... if you haven't decided to or not yet.
aBeautifulOblivion
2007-09-09
ch 9, anon.
abusePLEASE continue! I love this story, and have to know how it ends!
Cloudrules11
2007-08-01
ch 6,
abuseWoah, House as a cameo! I am shocked, amazed, happy, and sad at the same time. Awesome story, I am going to read the rest!

CR11
jake
2007-07-30
ch 9, anon.
abuseyou should continue the story
abeautifulOblivion
2007-05-16
ch 9, anon.
abuseit's a really good story, so finish it. I've loved reading it.
valor999
2007-02-26
ch 9,
abusekeep going!
insertsomethinghere
2007-02-16
ch 9,
abuseYES THE FREAKING SHOW SHOULD GO ON! GET ON WITH UPDATING THIS STORY!

-aznklaidei
Phoenix80hp
2007-01-26
ch 9,
abuseYou know I hate RikuxKairi fics...or even the mention of the couple I hate with a passion!!

But I do like this story! You must continue it! I must know what happens!!
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