A great story. I liked the part where they were playing softball against dayshift.

Oeh.. Great Story.. :D

I liked it! You personified the characters well, and I liked how you incorperated little details from past episodes... You know your stuff!

Nice use of the Improve lines. I could really see this happening on the show. Good job!

Very very cute and great use of the challenge lines!

So cute!!

Cute and lighthearted and a very clever use of the lines! I really enjoyed it.

This was very cute! Loved it!
Lynn

Aw...this was wicked cute! Not wildly out of character for Sara and Grissom either, despite the moments of fluffy goodness! Great response to the challenge.

Great story! I've been waiting for someone to write something up about this game. What I'd give to play softball with the CSIs... Nice job!

This was really cute. Too bad they can't show something like this on the series.

I'm definitely a fan of this story, considering I play competitive softball. This was a fun story to read, very different than the average CSI fan fic. One mistake I can see though is that there are only 7 innings in a softball game...other than that, it was great!

~K

heheh. really cute and fluffy. i really like it.

What a hoot! I really enjoyed this story...and Grissom gave Sara his hat - how cute is that?

So adorable and in character. Loved the line, "Anything less just wasn’t her style." So Catherine... SO-O-O-O Catherine.