Hehehe. Snape. Interesting portrayal of characters. This is definitely different from most of the fanfics I read but, again, you have my attention. You are an awesome writer. I hope your editing process is going smoothly. And Granger being the one to alter Draco, nice!

Great story, I love it ^^; if there was any way to rate it I'd give you full marks, looking foward to see what happens next. Things are going so quickly that it almost seems hard to believe it's been a full 14chapters, if you like anime and watch Inuyasha I'd love it if you dropped by and peeked at my own story, and if you like it leave a reviw, the support is appreciated as I'm sure you know as an author yourself. I hope you continue this, it's quite intriuging. You seem to have a creative immagination and I'm wondering what's going to happen next but I can honestly say I have no idea with the way you write, it's the type of style that leaves the readers on the edge of their seats, all the fluxes in the moods are great as well, as I said it keeps me wondering, but I love that. again, I complement you and the story immensely. ^^;

--Aryia

Interesting stuff and I like the way you write Charlie. Update soon!

I just started reading this story today but i've been in tears the last 3 or 4 chapters and it's just so sweet but sad and i badly want to hurt Hermione and Ron(in order its written). its such good writting and i really need some tissues and mayb i shud stop rambling. please update soon! =)

koolio
more?

You aren't getting your deserved reviews! I am a little bit more interested in the S/L part than the H/D but thats okay! I like having more than one pair to be interested in!

I have a story also if ya wanna read it! lol Can't wait for you to update!

Even though this is a H/D fic, I'm mostly thinking about the S/L relationship. Will Lucius find out (he better!) and what will happen? Oh, I'm just all to flustered to keep reviewing, but good job, way to go! Update soon!