this is a cool story. is dracona jon and aly's daughter? you should finnish it because it is amazing.

i am so sorry for u! poor lil sis

PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON!

Because I am me, I must point out that in the time change, you spelled month wrong ^w^ Sounds kinda cool

I'm sorry about your sister. I'm sending you 'feel better after a while' waves~. I really like this chapter. :)

I like! I like! Please write more!

hey, i love your fic, it's really funny. i love the way thom and jonathan act in the modern world. :D

Ooh, this sounds interesting, I like it! Are there any pairings in this? Sorry I'm obsessed. Bye!

Wow that first chapter of story went fast! I barely had time to get into the story and learn about the characters before it arrove at an abrupt end.

I was left wondering where the twin boy went when the twins' parents were escaping the banits. Other than that little confusing scene, this is a very nice and adventurous beginning to an exciting story.

This sounds good, keep up the good work!

awesome story, its great! This story sounds like it's gonna be fun