Hi!

First let me say I'm really liking this prose poem you've got going here . . . When it comes to Shakespeare-fic (especially when it's written well, like here) I love it. I'm definitely loving this whole story-poem romance. Great job!

And, yeah, I am SO still interested in seeing your ficlet on Victoria and Edward. I am just so incredibly flattered you did something like this. I can't wait to read it! Just PM me the story-- once again, I can't wait to read it! It's just too exciting!

Thanks a ton,
Sally

I thought I'd check this out while I had the time. Now I'm HOOKED.

Good job.

This was a GREAT chapter, well worth the wait! I love the feisty back-and-forth between Tybalt and Catherine, the way they challenge each other. This is such a fun story!

This is GREAT! You do an excellent job of getting into Tybalt's head and showing his character, and the ending leaves me VERY eager to see what happens with him and Catherine! Great job!

Oh come on, this is such a great story, love the Tybalt romance, please, please, please continue. Great Job keep it up!

Oh come on don't stop now. It is really good and one of my favorite stories so far. Love the Tybalt and Catherine romance. Please Please, Please continue!

Wow! Again very intriguing, especially with the old Language, but it's too short. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens and who cried out. More please!

Very nice! I love the fact that your chorus reads just like one of Shakespeare's. This definitely intrigues me and makes me want to read this. Continue!

I, of course, had to read this ^_^

You have an excellent sense of suspense in the first chapter. You have used very beautiful language, overall, too, particularly in the second chapter; I really get a feel for the inner voice of Catherine.

Keep up the good work!

Excellent! Catherine is a very distinct and likable character, and I'm intrigued to find out what her new engagement is. Lovely job with the formal-style language, too!

omg that was such an amazing chapter.

Oh, and happy 19th birthday, BookRose. And I hope you have a good one.

Americangurl

this is really good so far! please update!

This is good, but too short! I hope you can update soon!

ep! you must continue! it sound great! i love tybalt so this should be good. btw good job on the start, it looks like it took a lot of thinking! please update soon!