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Bagge 2007-04-15 ch 24,	abuseAnother ghost from Monica's past turn up. Goran seems to be just as unlikely as he's painted. Harry, of course, is just as protective as always. Points for a good use of Ron. Highly dramatic capture scene. Not bad job, a couple of teenagers fighting of a dozin or so aurors. And Harry used that nasty hex again - and on an auror who only tried to to his job... that will come back and haunt him.
Miranda Took 2007-04-11 ch 24,	abuseIt makes up for the delay. Good chapter. Is there more about Goran?
Darth Demon2 2007-04-10 ch 24,	abuseExcellant chapter
Darth Demon2 2007-02-17 ch 23,	abuseYeah it's been so long I damn near forgot about this fic.
Bagge 2007-01-16 ch 23,	abuseGornickos seems to be abundant at Hogwarts, the way people behave... Nice chapter. So, Feanor joins the drama, and isn't happy about Monica's plays in it. Somehow, I don't think he will be content with just writing letters when he sees his pupil get in deeper trouble. Keep it up!
Miranda Took 2007-01-15 ch 23,	abuse“Don’t worry. We’re used with people yelling at us, aren’t we Ron?” Hermione said as she looked pointedly at Harry. Harry smiled guiltily. “Oh, yeah! You should see Harry when he’s angry. I’m surprised we still have our heads.” Ron added smiling. “Ok, I think she got the idea.” Harry said blushing. And Gornickos, omg, I am dying of laughter!
Bagge 2006-09-23 ch 22,	abuseThe ministry sure knows how to use the press as a weapon - but what on earth does Scrimgour imagine he wins by blackpainting Monica? It might be another Stan; attack an innocent to show the community that the ministry does SOMETHING. Or he might seriously believe Monica to work with Voldemort. In either case - they are on the run now. The dementor episode was well written and reminded me quite a lot of the Ringwraith episode in Fellowship of the rings when the hobbits hid from the mounted wraith. I really love how you write Fleur, and what she knows. A girl that isn't fully a human... It will be interesting to see what that letter contains. One year! Wow, time flies, and we have both produces quite some readable fics. Good luck with your writing.
Miranda Took 2006-09-23 ch 22,	abuseWOW, so you updated. Took you long enough. That dementor part was scary, and chilling. Why did you have to end at the letter(maybe I shouldn't talk but still...)Good work, update soon.
Miranda Took 2006-08-17 ch 21,	abuseI like the opening description of the cities and the Elvish element of your story. It's a good chapter.
Bagge 2006-08-14 ch 21,	abuseVoldemort found Imladris? Wow! He kept busy. His little musings about the decay of the elves was intruiging and well in character. Nice little scene with an interesting build-up to what will follow. I enjoyed Nevilles thoughtful, business-like side comment. Good to see that he has a part of the story. So Monica and Romendacil managed to cut a deal? Good for them. Hope they will work it out.
Bagge 2006-07-12 ch 20,	abuseI really like the idea of Victor and Charlie in a friendly/compeating relationship. It was a good way you made him know Monica. Also, you are adding a number of details that makes Monica's place in the wizarding world believable: The defence practise was a good example. She know the Eagis spell, because Argeleb has taught it to her, but she doesn't know the patronus spell since there are no dementors in romania. Apart from that, this chapter was a fine mix of crying and snogging.
Miranda Took 2006-07-12 ch 20,	abuseGeat update. There is nothing wrong with using a killinkg curse ,I think, it matters more how you use your powrs than what powers you have.
cmtaylor531 2006-06-19 ch 19,	abuseDifferent but i like it!!
Miranda Took 2006-06-16 ch 19,	abuseYou have a great plot, great imagination, great characters and good going so far. Only pay attention to spellings and you will have an even better story.
Miranda Took 2006-06-15 ch 4,	abusedumbfounded, not folded, and I hate doing this. I hope you are not hating me, I only want you to be more careful so that your chapters read better.

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