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| Christine Ruud 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseSad and hopeful at the same time. |
| ZeDude 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI love this! I look forward to reading your other. |
| J. B. Tilton 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story. You have everyone completely in character. Your choice of descriptions are absolutely perfect. The reader can really feel the emotions the people are going through and feel the pain and anquish Phoebe has to suffer because of Cole. Not necessarily what he did but her choices. And Piper's reactions were completely within character. This is a very good story and I hope to see more in the future. Jerry |
| shel 2005-09-14 ch 1, | abusewhat a beautifully done, if bittersweet, alternate ending...you managed to keep phoebe consistent with her belief at the time that cole should be gone from her life but you infused that belief with love and made it believable...also liked how you brought piper into this - that she immediately understood about the nightmare and that she later suspected what phoebe had done to cole...nice the way you brought up prue and made the connection to paige...thanks for sharing this... |