Beautifully written and heart wrenching... you're one of the few people on here who can write reflective character sketches well :) I'm glad my type of story isn't a dying breed.

That was so beautiful! I loved your take on Anakin's last words. And the analogy about the twins being Padme reincarnated in a way - very cool :) Great job!

That was a beautiful one shot.

I loved Obi-Wan's words. that was powerful.

How very, very sad... but it was a beautiful story. Lovely job. I especially liked the addition of Obi-Wan's taunt at the end there- very creative and highly likely, now that I think of it. I also liked how Anakin starts to remember the good things about his life at the time of his death... it's how I would want to go!

That's so sad!

hey..this is so sweet..simple and poignant. just your style. i love it! do write more!

Aw, sad and sweet, heart-breaking and yet wonderful to have them together again, even in the forever of the afterlife. :)

hey that was good. Plz write more it was cool..

Oh my gosh that was so good! If this didn't seem like a one shot(is it?) I'd say "pls updte soon!" It's only 1:38 am and I am soposed to wake up at 6:oo! g2g! Ja Ne!