u should totally make another chapter please

That's so sad - but very cleverly written! You would think that maybe Vader would consider the fact that this Leia was actually HIS Leia, lol. Nice job!

What an intriguing little snippit... It really does a great job at characterizing Vader's mindset. His blindness to the truth, his desperate belief that the horrible things his did were for the best... and the bittersweet love for a family he never had. Great job!

This was absolutely breathtaking and not without a sense of irony. The tone of it is ironic and bitter...and simply amazing. All I can really say is 'wow.'

Interesting, my friend. I could see how that since he didn't know that Leia was his real daughter, he could have very well have felt malice and hatred toward the girl because of her resemblance and passion toward everything that reminded him of his deceased wife, Padme. It was a bit short, however, but I think it was effective enough to get the point across. Good job!

I can't understand why this story has so few reviews.
I really liked it!
It brings an interesting twist to their relationship.
Good job!

Wow!! This was really good and chock full of angsty irony! Just my cup of tea! :-) Excellent job!

sad, terribly sad and bittersweet.
I love it.