This BROKE my heart, I felt really bad for Sesshomaru. I would hate having that happen to me, but amazing job!

You envision Sessh's life dependancy on Rin over his nightmeres in a heavy shadowed manner. Sessh couldn't live without her. Rin is his heart, not just holding his heart.

how sad

AWESOME~! BELIEVE IT!

AH you made me CRY
i was surprised when Rin didn't go back with Sesshomaru but the ending is still good

this story was amazing i loved it except for the ending i hate how u didnt let sesshomaru and rin end up together it shocked me i never assumed that this would ever happened i m shocked that u ended the story in this way and i would love to see a sequal be down to say that rin made a mistake and want to go back to him u ended it so that if u wanted to make a sequal u could so i think u should i think he should end up going after her and try to chage her mind or if u dont mind i would like to write a sequal myself if that is ok with u i got a great idea as to what i can write please get back to me and let me no i m new to this site so i dont no how it works so if u cant send emails through it then email me at thank you
brittany

i love this! i thought Rin and Sesshy will end up together but the ending of the story surprised me in a good way. although i wish they would end up together...beautifully written. i guess u should elaborate more on sesshomaru's character...it's kind of weird that he came out telling her that he loved her so easily. it seems sort of unbelievable. overall, i love it! keep writing about rin and sesshy!

Oh holy crap! I read this story many, many years ago! It was on ! I have a printout of it in my room, I read it like... everyday! That's so cool! I loves this story, and the sequel! Great Job!

great storie i cryd when Rin cryd for a reason unknow to me

I love this story! The ending though!! R!! Its good but its like im torn. I like how she's independent but im mad cause she choose not to go to him. great job

Oh wow! This is a very great story so far!

An excellent story that is filled with unexpected intense emotion!

I think it is wonderfully written and would have loved for it to be longer.

I also think that you could have had Rin going back to the village, notice the difference in her love for Marju and Sess., and finally after additional karma anguish given to Sess, that they do finally find each other as equals in love.

Thanks for writing this!

How about a happy ending!? I'd definitely like one of those! D; I honestly can't imagine Rin ever saying no to Sesshomaru. Maybe in stubborness as Rin is obviously terribly stubborn, but not to a request for her to stay. She pratically despises human life, so I highly doubt she would ever choose that over an eternity with Sesshomaru . . . This was nicely written though! :P

-Paramour

it was very good. i liked it. but i think rin would stay with sessy. and wouldnt talk back to him. but thats just my opinion. it was a good story! do more

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