you must continue this story. It is wonderful.
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the Triscuit

Don't Stop now. I just found this story. I like the angle. They are a bit out of character, but it's your story. You can do what you want. Keep it up!

good chapter. though i have to agree with the A/N about eternia being a bit much, unless your planning to get into the whole he-man: "masters of the universe" thing.
but how about avalon. where magic is believed to have been born

This sems good so far, but how about some romance?

intresting fic keep it up

This chapter insults your readers. Dumbledore is a good guy, the books make it quite clear. He might make a few mistakes, and he may occasionally be misguided (that's up for interpretation), but he's a good guy. Your Dumbledore is not just out of character, he's a completely different one.

I reviewed over on FicWad but what the heck.

It's an interesting take on the Voldie/Harry relationship. I look forward to more because Manipulative Dumbledore getting his arse handed to him is about my favorite niche in HPFF.