Aw, nicely done! You got Jake down pat, good work! :-)

Very good job, ell written and in character. It sounded just like a monologue that Jake could've had. Or maybe him writing a story. Great job.

"Now my Mom died in a Borg attack, and my father – well, let’s not get into that. It was a shock, at any rate. So you’d think Grandpa getting a peaceful, natural death would be easier." - So sad, yet powerful.

"Family sticks together and pulls through. Grandpa taught me that." Aww, how sweet.

You did an excellent job on this. The Sisko's were never my fave characters, but you made this very interesting to me.

So touching! A worthy tribute to Brock Peters and to "Grandpa" Sisko. The references to the '05 Hurricanes were also well done. It's great to see characters that aren't usually written about in fanfic get such good treatment.

Great story and a fitting tribute to Brock Peters and New Orleans. Again, a great story.

Great story. Very touching...

WONDERFUL Story Selena! Man, I'd forgotten how much I missed DS9! You nailed the characters and the timing and 'history' are great. :) And no, Katrina didn't kill New Orleans. She'll come back bigger and better, just like grandpa Sisko said.

Thank you for such a great story.

Dayna