okay I'm through it until then current chapter. Great work so far kiddo! You also gave me a huuge heartattack as Terry got the news from Peter and as she got stabbed and hell I did had one again as the thing with Don happened ... but hey it seems like I have recovered and I'm waiting for this to continue. I mean I still want to know if she is that pretty bad ill or not. Thanks for this god work!

WOAH!! Very great! I'm just at the beginning of the story but I'm totally on the hook. And you have gotten a huge TERRY FAN into pure fear! Now I'm really concerned about her well being ah! I will just carry on and read until the current last chapter. Until than pleease keep at that great work it's amazing.
Thanks!

Finish the story then post it. Working on 3 years on a story that is not even that good.Keep trying!

These stories turning Don into some kind of monster used to be very popular and I was hoping we were past them. Frankly, they really offend me. Maybe somebody should try turning Charlie into a monster for once. At least that would be original.

Is there any chance you may finish this story some day? It is really good, but I've only read a couple of chapters. I don't want to read an ending that isn't an ending, so I want to know if there is any chance you will finish it.

nice! please update

Very nice story. I can't quite understand why you haven't gotten more reviews, because it's very well written. Keep going. :)

I cant believe Terry's ex. How could he keep something like that from her for a YEAR. hope u update soon, maybe we'll get some D/T?

More please... now :) Really interesting cant wait to see where it is going

I'm glad you continued this. I'm really intrigued to see what's going on.

Your story is very well written and I really enjoy the intelligent attention given to the forensic details. I can't even guess, really, where it's going.

looking forward to more!

hey! this looks like it'll be really good. it seems almost centered on terry(my favorite character) which is awesome. *cough* DT! *cough*

was that subtle enough? hehe. update soon!
xox
ollie

this sounds awsome! it's kinda confusing right now, but i can't wait to see what happens next! i'm seriously hooked! usually i write longer reviews but i have an unbelievable amount of homework to do. i can't wait for your next chapter!
steffie