This definetely needs more chapters or at least a sequel... I love this story please continue... Love how the characters were true to form... Great writing... I love, love this story...

JENNIFER

that was brilliant, one of the best JD stories iv read

Aw...that's cute! Loved the conference call between Josh, CJ, Toby and Sam! Awesome story! Any more or is that it?

WONDERFUL! A perfect introduction and its so Josh. update soon

Cute. I can see Josh doing something like that

very cute, would like to see a chapter 2

Im really hoping this iusnt a stand alone.

Although I have a feeling that it is *sighs*

But OMG it was perfect. So Josh. So stupid, so scared, and I love him *squee!*

Great work!

This was very good! I loved Josh having the secret service watching Donna.

o this is good. very good

Good first chapter, I just hope that Josh will realize that he needs her soon.

btw, I think that having her watched by the SS is sweet.

Update soon.

Aw that was so cute

i love josh and donna