:o Wow. That was really cool man! Yeah, Marv is cool. Seems a bit misunderstood though... lol, keep it up, that was awesome!

I can see a big, hulking figure walking through the streets. I recognize that walk, and I think I know who it is. Of course, the coat’s different, but that happens every time we see him.
M:**Nice touch!

He tells the twins what to do, and they obey.
M:**Wendy and Goldie?

He’s really a good man, Marv. Loves his mother and takes care of his friends, so we don’t mind if he calls the shots around here once in a while.
M:**My favorite character. I've always thought Marv was a good guy, just misunderstood and "confused". ;) Anyway, I really enjoyed this. You nailed the characters and atmosphere. Is the narrator Gail?

Good job!

Great story. 5/5

Awesome!