Yay! I knew it!... the blood falvoured potion kind of made it obvious...
I like the way that you made Harry a lot smarter than JK :)

Not that it really matters cause I have had no problems figuring out what you meant to say each time, but you have an issue where you seem to write the wrong word in certain places. It's always some thing small and always the last few letters of the word that are messed up. Like the one that comes to mind is where you put group instead of ground and the other way around at another point.

I was wondering what became of Boot. He didn't seem to show up after the in between story one-shot you wrote about him. I was almost ready to send you a review asking about him, then I read this chapter and see that he didn't just disappear.

Yes! I was actually right! I had a feeling that those games were you got the idea for Solieyu. Well at least parts of him anyway.

Well now we know that Solieyu can sense Loopin, but can Loopin sense him?

What the hell is he? I'm assuming that you got the idea for him from a video game, but which one I'm not sure. If I could figure out the game I'd go and buy it just so I could see what your insperation was for his "problem".

Good chapter. You misspelled Hippogriff.

I loved how you twisted everything. It's much better than cannon, seriously.
Also, I knew he was a vampire!! just his mannerisms in the first book made me think vamp. I must admit, I thought he might have been a lycanthropic-vampire when he transformed into a wolf in the forest, because I've never heard any myths in which vamps can do that... meh, artistic license.
Leon's definitely my favourite character though. He's awesome.

That was really well written and very entertaining. Thanks.

-Artemis

i hope u found a way around cedric dying if rekindled i actually like him as a character now if draco somehow dies from pettigrew im all for it and i dont think pettigrew would complain he hates the malfoys

i assume that blood sucking ** that bit leon is gonna get whats comming to her? on a side note i think turning harry into a green dragon animagus from dnd would be cool i mean being able to spew a poisen breath with no antidote would be nice not to mention highly corrosive and riddled with the oldest magic on earth

i no this is a tad bit late but tonks relationship to serius would b a first cousin once removed.

good fic

Ya know I like your PoA better then cannon... :0)

ok, now i really am ** off at myself . . .. i haven't come across the idea of vampires being able to transform into wolves before though . . . . probably because of my limited opportunity to game . . . . i had a deprived childhood . . . literally . . . . and it's probably my insomniac tired brain thats making me write this, but your version of harry's childhood? fewer beatings and more, differend types of assault, plus three major psychological disorders . . . . that sounds like what i remember . . . . . .

dammit, now i'm really confused . . . . if leon is a vampire, i'm going to be even more upset with myself. . . right now it's cos i was wrong, but if i was right and doubted myself, that's even worse . . . . i can't figure it out!


good on you for actually keeping me guessing, i haven't found an author who could do that for quite some time