  Kira
2006-03-24 . chapter 1 This is so beautiful, although the story is very sad. But you've mentioned to write in a way which captures the mind of the reader and makes him feel the story as if he/she is right there, at the beach, when Kira leaves.
OMG, my emotions really got loose when I read this and at the end I felt tears filling my eyes and then gently falling down my cheek. Yep I know, it's strange to hear a man saying that. But your story really touched me so deeply. I've been sitting here, reading it and admireing your writing skills, as is I were nailed to my chair. My mind was spinning around, perfectly visualising the scenes, but my body was frozen stiff. You've managed to get good old active me ever so quiet, so you can say that your story really provoced the suitable effect.
I do hope that you will make a following to this story. I would love to see the story go on (and I hope that Kira and Lacus will at the end of it find each other (you know what I mean))
Congratulations on this one. You can be proud of the work you've done!
Your friend, Kira (you know who I am *wink*) |
 cherryheart
2005-10-24 . chapter 1omg omg omg this is soo sad, i cryed at the end, yah yah im a big sap, please write more chapters, this can be more then just a oneshot, losts of possiblities ^_^ |
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