I realy realy like this story, keep writing PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!

really liking the story please continue

Hey

I really like this story alot :)

I hope you continue it cause I'm dying to read more about it.

Great story so far. I hope you update soon!

Please update soon! I love this story!

Are you at all familiar with the concept of a "Mary-Sue"?

Look it up. I'll wait a minute.

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All set with that? Good. Then I'm sure you now know how utterly obnoxious and yet unfortunately common Mary-Sues are in fanfiction. The purpose of fanfiction is to expand on a movie, tv show, book, etc., to add something new and original to an already existing medium.

This piece of fiction is stupid. It's just plain stupid. You basically said to yourself, "Wow, I really liked this movie. You know how it would be even better? If I was in it, only instead of myself, a really pretty, kick-ass version of me with a cool name that everyone loves! Yeah, that'd be awesome! *Squeal*" So you did a half-assed, poorly-spelled recap of the movie including a stand-in for yourself.

Worst of all (although the lack of proper grammar is pretty appalling as well), you can't even be consistent with the spelling of your character's name. You go from "Riely" to "Riley".

Seriously, you're a dumbass. Just stop.

Good story if only you would continue it. Whats happening thats causing you to take so long?

Great story.. please continue...

More more more more more

OH! Shit! Next they are going to see Gamble in the Bar aren't they? Update Soon! It's a different perspective and I like it! Street and Riley! Right?

Awesome fic. Update soon.

This is good so far. I can't wait to see Gamble's reaction when Street and Riley come into together. I hope you intend on updating this!

Amanda

More please can't wait for more of this fantastic story X3

I Am So Excited You Updated! I Been Waiting For This Story To Continue! I Really Enjoy This Story And Your Writing!

i love it!