Dude! (Or dudette, whichever). Anyway, that was awesome! I'm going to read The System is Gone. Right now!

HOMESTAR,
RUN.
RUN!
HOMESTAR,
RUN.
RUN!
WEEKDAYS!
this is the only way i can think to show you how awesome that this story was! i also love the comic that you made for this on deviantart!

This story is so cool! I didn't even know there were Homestar fanfics until I found this. Keep up the good work on this!

and,i think your vision of homestar humised is hot.^_^^_^_^_^_^_^_^^_^

i like your fanfics.it's the best h*r fic series i ever read.they could make serious bleedman comics and that's a coliplent.^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^

Pretty cool.

I' an idiot for not reviewing this when I first read it (which was a while ago

A human Homestar? VERY cool and VERY original idea. Me likey! ^_^

awsome fic! you go the charicters pefect and everyhting! i couldnt look away for a second! ^^

This was RIDICULOUSLY fab. I loved every bit of it! In character, very funny X3 Thumbs way way up, muchacho.

Hehe...please leave a message after The Cheat. Good jokes...anywho...uh, what to say? Really good. Nice infusion of the brothers' reality and Homestar's, uh, fantasy? Maybe? Okay, well...nice job, man. Good idea saying "end-o-logue", I can never remember if it's "pro" or "epi". Maybe it's pri or epo...E-Pro, that was a good song. Anyway, the ending was kinda cliché, but ever since the original story was written as a satire on modern children's books, Homestar Runner has been nothing but one huge cliché. So, uh, good job! And don't sue me if our stories get too similar.

Is there gonna be a sequel? Plz do a sequel! Awesome story and ending! Man, makes me wish they actually did this on the website.

Da man, Adam

ugh, you have to update! Good stuff, good work, keep going!

Please write more, and get Homestar some speech classes! He isn't pronouncing his "R's" like he did in the part where Matt/Mike says, "He's pronouncing his R's. I think you hit him harder than I thought." They say this is a bad thing. I think it's a good thing! When he lost his ability to pronounce his R's I thought, "Oh, come on, man! Just when things were going well!"

... Oh, em gee,. That was Hiwarious! I mean hilarious! Please update soon!