That was the best fic I read today!

but you should have gave Klein more roles but I'm not complaining.(I have not played it for a long time though)

It is nice to be reminded about Klein and Veola's relationship.

The spoiler was not that noticeable

hey cool work! Lemme guess sumthing... klein likes veola? Whoa now that's what i call artistic!

Cool fic! A great idea, writing about the knights of Alkavana.

Unlike most fanfiction created by today's generation, your story focuses almost entirely on original characters and the secondary cast. You portrayed these characters, who don't gain nearly as much screen time in the gameas the main cast, so well, it is as if they were your own. Although I believe your descriptions need a bit of polishing, they were not that bad.

I hope you will be able to continue this sometime in the future. And when that day comes, I'll read it. Because this story has potential to become great if it continues to be written with skill.

That was a nice start. I hope you will eventually upadate this.

Nice story! I hope you update soon!

Veola: FEAR MY BOMBS!

lol :D