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livesonwisteria
2008-10-05 . chapter 17
Great story, please update
fly-away-free
2007-08-09 . chapter 17
Awesome!
Wow, I can't believe you put in another chapter. I love this story, you're a fantastic writer, and the depth of the characters is really incredible. I like how you mix the personality traits of the characters that are canon into the story, but also let them grow and develop as the story does. Neville rules, and it's an original plotline. Yay!
ficklemuse74
2007-07-31 . chapter 17
I'm really enjoying this story a lot.

I love Neville's inclusion into the Weasley clan and the mystery surrounding his grandmother's death.

You've done a really lovely job of keeping them all in character and illustrating all their individual relationships: Molly & her children, each of the Weasley kids to their siblings, Ron and Hermione, Harry and Neville. It makes for an excellently well rounded story and I am looking forward to more!
Red Bess Rackham
2007-07-09 . chapter 17
I'm so happy to see you updated!! I love this story. Very good chapter. You made Anthony Goldstien and his house so cool, and I would give anything to spend a week in that library of his, lol. It sounds wicked. Please update soon, I adore this story! :D (Yup, I'm still reading it.)

~Red
aptteach123
2007-07-09 . chapter 17
Great chapter! I loved it. Keep up the awesome work, and please try to update again soon!
x8jessica8x
2007-07-09 . chapter 17
YEA! I've been waiting so long for an update to this story... I absolutly love the Pippi Longstocking reference...
mou
2007-06-03 . chapter 1
cool.
Lee Swain
2007-01-27 . chapter 16
Great fic so far keep it coming.
Lily x James 4 eva
2006-08-14 . chapter 16
Ah!Update! Update! Tis very, very good!

~Danielle~
Red Bess Rackham
2006-08-08 . chapter 16
Oh, I *love* Neville. And he and Ginny *so* have to get together. As much as I love Neville and Luna as a pair, I am very much beginning to think that Ginny is the perfect alternative. :D

I am so excited for when they finally figure out what the plant was and what happened to Gran and that it was Bellatrix and did it and everything and all that. :D

Update soon!

~Red Bess Rackham
Lily x James 4 eva
2006-08-06 . chapter 8
The Wealsey's remind me of my family: Loud, obnoxious, speak-their-mind, always think they know whats right, afriad of our mother, Except we're dirty , not red heads.

~Danielle~ P.S. I'm serious, we're the american muggle weasleys.
Lily x James 4 eva
2006-08-06 . chapter 3
AW! Poor Harry. He's too cute to have nightmares. ;D

~Danielle~
Lily x James 4 eva
2006-08-06 . chapter 1
So It's Neville? Interesting...

~Danielle~
chocoluvr
2006-08-05 . chapter 16
Good story, but are you going to have Harry tell Neville about the prophecy since it could provide motive for murder. I also think that it is good to have both Harry and Neville both talk about their feelings.
books4me
2006-07-28 . chapter 16
As always, you did a great job.

I like you have developped Neville's character.

I look forward to reading more,

* Books4mE *
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