aw, that was so sweet!! it's rare to see Bilbo/Sam interactions, and this was very very well done. written in hobbit style as well, i applaud you. i will be looking forward to more stories from you.
That was the sweetest, awesomest story ever!! SO cute!! I love how Bilbo was scared that Frodo might think he was calling the Shirrifs on him. This is just so beautifully written and the little bits of subtle humor are so nicely woven in. GREAT job!!