I really love the way you have written this. I hope to see more chapters in the future!

I like it so far! Please update soon!

You stop there?!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Update, Update my kingdom for an update...Please

Oh yeah you're a loony one all right. So the plot is thickening eh? Wonder what's going to become of Anna and Mikey? Cause if I'm thinking correctly, things aren't going to get easy for them right? Update soon please!

This looks really interesting! I can't wait to see where you go with this. (I still want to know what happened with Mikey and whoever it was on the surface.) I really like the character you created, she very unique. Great job writing so far, and you did a good job with portraying everyone else too. Keep it up!

I loved what I read Luna. Your writing have improved since the last time I read your fanfic.

M2

Well took you long enough to update! but I'm glad you did, at least now we have a little more in depth info about poor Ann's past, the poor dear, I take it Mike never mentioned anything about her health problems, huh... Raph had better be nice, after all she's just a little girl!

Wow, I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work and update soon please.

Galaxya

yay! you're not making raph a jerk anymore! whoho! party!

I love it Luna.

I have never EVER seen my Mikey that angry or upset before. Raph must have really hit a sore spot huh? And poor Donnie. He was just trying to be the go between and what happens? He almost gets the tar beaten out of him! Ya see what happens when you try to be nice during confrontations? And poor Leo doesn't have the slightest clue as to what's going on does he? Neither does Splinter. I really do feel for Anna (did I get her name right?). She doesn't mean any harm but it's going to take a lot of hard work on her part to convince Raph that's she not a baddie. Then again, since when did Raph ever care about people's motives? If he's pegged you as a threat, baddie and etc then you're as good as toast. Let's see what the next chapter shall bring us! ^_^

Typical Raph worrying over the outcome. The what if this leads to trouble. And of course to Raph she is a stranger so a threat until she proves other wise.

Anna saying leave him alone dad, shows how much she is trapped in her flash backs of what her dad did.
Looks like Don may have to wait for his answers, but I have a feeling Splinter and Leo will be getting those answers very quickly.

Meanwhile I must wait for next chapter and console myself by munching warm cookies. M! Cookie the breakfast of champions.

Raph's got issues? now that would be interesting, hehehe... and yes! I've read MNT Gaiden, it's AWSOME! I'm addicted to the thing! XD

wonderful chapter, though how the battle 'stopped' felt a bit- sudden! but hey, they stopped Raph from adding a new hole to Mikey's head, so who am I to complin?