Oh, I know how she feels, it´s terrible when our girly dreams fade away... I like this story a lot

Really deep, I was very surprised at reading something like this. Pleasently surprised of course

Ah. This is extrodinary and deleciously dark. It is very gripping, a great love story. You really potrayed their relationship well, and fairly creatively. It was a nice change from the fluffjunk that sours up DG's.

I loved the style of this, and the metaphors were great (to name one, "His long, skinny fingers wrapping around her spine, throat, heart, like black curling vines." by far the best). Your descriptions really paint a picture.

Constructive crit? Ehh. I won't be nit-picky, this was just too good.

To put it plainly and spare you all the details: I loved this, it was incredible.

That was amazing! Shame it was one shot though.

A strange relationship. i loved the way this was written, the odd landscape of words throw together to recreate the passion and anger and confusion of thier relationship. Amazing stuff, i loved it.

Some moments gave me a freaky feeling inside, especially when you detach the characters from who they are and situate them in the universe. So, I absolutely love it...

very cool.i liked it you didnt make it cheezy so it became quite dark.well done

Ah this story was just so beautiful!! I really REALLY enjoyed it. WOW. GREAT JOB.

This was so wonderful. Love the pace.

That was amazing.

I can't describe how amazing.

So I'll just leave it at that.

wow, powerful. I like the style of your writing and the way that it splits into sections. Everything about it is great, I like the fact that there's no disillutioned happy ending or wonderful love story. It's very real and that makes it a very powerful and hardhitting piece of writing. It's very different.

~Chantal~

Mmk, this was odd...
But I liked it!
You're talented! ^.^

Lovely. Absolutely amazing.

I absolutely love this piece, this is one of the most moving D/G stories I've ever read.Everyone is in character, and everything you wrote was beautiful. I like how there romance was harsh, and seemed at times, unhealthy, like all realtionships were. I like how Draco remained cruel, and Ginny remained compassionate. This was just a good fic.

i LOVED IT!! AWESOME. It was so good. Amazing work.