|Reviews for The Demon Design|
| XxHuntressxX 7/1/07 . chapter 8
update this fic now or suffer my rath!
i want to see what happened to poor arty!
| misstee793 6/26/07 . chapter 8
*Squeals* Oh gosh, a cliffhanger, eh? Well, I guess I'll have to live with it DX I just hope you'll have mercy on me and update soon! :D I'll be waiting for the next chapter eagerly! :)
| Wolfgirl13 6/12/07 . chapter 8
Hey! Don't even worry about it. Your version is MUCH better. So please don't forget and not update. I'd love to see what's happening next! So is Artemix really blind now? Please continue soon! Thanks very much!
| XxXThe HuntressXxX 5/6/07 . chapter 1
This fic is awesome! great write!
| Miako 4/30/07 . chapter 8
You know, I found myself thinking something similar when i was reading it. Great story so far, I can't wait for more.
| knighted lioness 4/29/07 . chapter 8
umm, im confused...is he actually blind, or is that what ALMOST happened? cus it'll be RELLI lame if he's blind...
| Nips 4/29/07 . chapter 8
Ohmigod! Artemis! It's like every Clamp manga I've ever read is happening again! There better be some serious fairy healage coming up. Liek, srsly. If they can reattach eyes... ugh... Just picturing the injuries is too much. Especially with Artemis. I love the way you write him. He's so in character, and you do a great job of building upon as well as reinforcing his personality. I look forward to the next chapter!
| critic 4/28/07 . chapter 8
Oh my god, please tell me there is some way to get Artemis's eyes back.
| Mistress of the Knight 4/28/07 . chapter 8
Oh yipee! You have not abandoned this story! I am indescribably glad! I hope it won't sound too creepy of me to say that in my mind you are now a better writer that Eowan Colfer (spelling? Can't be bothered to check!). I too was disappointed in the Lost Colony. PLEASE please please keep writing this one as it is so very much how I felt that book should have been written. You've got the humour and the great characters down pat but there's far more suspense and drama in this story!
| HecatonchiresLM 4/28/07 . chapter 8
Yeah, Lost Colony wasn't amazing. Your demons tho, those are damn scary.
| SisterDear 4/24/07 . chapter 8
Considering I haven't read the Lost Colony, I don't mind if it's AU at all. _
Oh, ouchies, Artemis. Nasty as this may sound, I really like the way you write/describe injuries. It's very blunt, I guess is the best word. The fact that you rarely describe the pain the injuries cause makes it all the more poignant.
| sympatheticassassin 4/24/07 . chapter 8
good to see you continuing the story. Artemis isn't blind is he?
| artyfan1 4/24/07 . chapter 8
i like these demons better. not that i like violence but this is more suspenseful. please write more! I'm really getting into it!
| Lady Charity 4/24/07 . chapter 8
cool fic! This is well written and going in my favs! Very interesting how you made harpies imitate voices. Unless that is canon in some story. Hope you update soon!
| extra short 4/11/07 . chapter 7
congradulations on winning the orion awards! and i can see why! it was so funny! you should do more!