great story :)

Haha, nice!

I'd love to see a sequel of this, espically if they still ran into Sarah Jane Smith, can you imagine her reaction.

Great story keep it up sis

I LOVED the story-best plotline ever..brilliant

Fantastic stuff!
I'm working on giving those two a happy ending myself; Christopher Eccleston has to be the best Doctor yet, and Billie Piper didn't do all that bad either.

Loved all of it, except maybe the wording of the ending. Otherwise, your technique is impressive and the idea very original. Fantastic!

I'm looking forward to a sequel.

Its good... but u do know that something like this has already been done - FireOpal did a fic called "Species". But whatever, good anyway. I like the bit with Kika ;)

Cu in the Time Vortex

~ Cossie

I think it was great! I absolutely adored it. I was amazed by how long it was and it just kept going getting bettr and better! Please do a sequel!