That was fascinating...

OK, let me just start off by sayin that this story is great. But i have to be honest, i really don't understand the end. wat happened with the angel attack? is shinji dead? is misato?

Well it was written very well. A lot better than a lot of stories on here. But while other stories may be simplistic to an almost child like quality, your story is layered in complicated webs of intrigue that make the point of the story almost impossible to obtain. I would really like to see a summary of this story (if you still have one since it was written last year) so I can appreciate it more. Because I have a feeling that everything is there, but the signs are just too foggy to make out for a reader like myself. A less subtle version is what I suppose I'm asking for.

Please!?!?!?!?(puppy dog eyes)

Your writing is good, but as another reviewer said, you need to learn how to keep a coherent story. I have no clue what really happened. Why were they in X location, and etc...

ilove it, i just wish i really understud what the hell happend. I mean i got the writen meaning but the point of it all is beyond me

continue!

Really well done, beautifully written. I loved the display of emotions when Misato told Shinji she loved him. I always looked at their relationship, as something more than just then being roomates. They care deeply for each other.

Good job!

Wow, that got really disjointed, really fast. You need to learn how to keep a coherent story going. There are right and wrong ways of being vague.

There are a lot of other issues with this story. There is no setup, no explanation of where and why the characters are doing what they are doing, no explanation as to why Misato and Shinji were where they were at the beginning, weird new kinds of angels popping up out of ** knows where, random other things that make no ** sense. There is no sense at all to this. It's essentially your brain vomiting up some kind of vague story idea you had. I actually had to WORK to read beyond the first 10 or so paragraphs.

This story was cool for what it was. But it was a little confusing at the end. What really happened to Shinji and Misato? Will Rei recover? Will Shinji fight on, and if he does, will it be for Misato? That only makes sense based on what I have read about thus far.
GO EVA GO!

This was really something. You did an excellent job in capturing the emotions of everyone. I don't know if there's more in the future, but even if there's not, I like what /is/ here.

This is perhaps the best written Anno-esc fiction ever. It left me confused and with significantly more questions than answers. To quote myself after having watched the end of evangelion: 'what the **!'

Fantastic. I was a little wary of the opening, but it all worked exceedingly well. Interesting how you jumped in at the middle of everything. It worked though. There really is a lack of serious stories regarding the complex relationship between Shinji and Misato, and this a good one. Great characterizations. I can only hope you continue this.