amazing ... words fail to describe how touching and well written this story is. Great job!

What a sweet and funny story! Loved it! :)

Loved this! Loved the Ryoo & Pooja scene. However, I would have loved to see what happens with the offer for the Council seat. I hope you'll do something about that.

Awesome

This- this was simply fantastic! I love the AU you created, and I certainly hope there will be some one-shots on Anakin's, Padmé's, Luke and Leia's future. And everyone else's, for the matter. Oh Mace, how I have finally gotten revenge for all the times you treated Anakin like crap... *evil grin*

First off, I tend to not review anything on this site unless I believe it's truly exceptional. And you have most definitely written a piece here that blew all my preconceived notions about good Anakin/Padme romances out of the water. You truly have a great gift as an author, and I do hope to be seeing more from this universe soon.

Second, I adore the way you write Padme. It annoys me how many authors portray her as a weaker, almost clingy character. I've never encountered someone who wrote her the way I imagined her (as the strong and witty Padme) until I began reading your stories.

Third, the interaction you write between Anakin and Padme is very, very genuine and often humorous. Not many authors acknowledge that part of their relationship.

Lastly, (a kind of random thing to notice) I adore the way you write Yoda. Again, there are many authors who paint him as this stodgy, cagey, defensive old dude. Yet, you are able to show him to be truly wise and open to change, and maintaining that humor I think we all know he is capable of :)

So, thank you. Reading your stories is truly an enjoyable experience for me, and I look forward to more from you in the future. -Serena

What a great story this was. I enjoy reading AU fics on episode III and this one was very well done.

Quote: Sola just about lost it laughing at that one. End quote.

I DID lose it laughing at that one. ;) You made that entirely (in my opinion) cheesy romance hilarious and entertaining. You also made it seem much more meaningful than I gathered from the show. :D Well done.

This is a cute and very nice ending for the Skywalkers. A lot of times people tried to make a different ending to the tragedy of ani and padme but this one is done very well.

I'm just wondering, it would be a lot of fun if you wrote a one- shot of anakin visiting Ryoo and Pooja's school like in the beginning. That would be a fun story to read

cool

It's nice to see such a well-written "what if" story about these characters :) I hope you continue on with this AU world; its very...happy

Awwwww I really love this story, especially Anakin's relationship with Pooja and Ryoo! Totally priceless cuteness...:D:D

I loved this purely loved it. You are such an amazing star wars writer, simply wonderful. Please write more Anakin and Padme stories.

I really liked this whole story, but that play-by-play of who-seduced-who was marvelous. Great job.

aw i really like this story!

i always hated the end of the revenge of the sith

i didnt like that anakin turned evil and padme died

i like this version much better )