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Reviews for: Salvation - Page 1 of 3
Serena Bancroft 2/17/12 . chapter 1
First off, I tend to not review anything on this site unless I believe it's truly exceptional. And you have most definitely written a piece here that blew all my preconceived notions about good Anakin/Padme romances out of the water. You truly have a great gift as an author, and I do hope to be seeing more from this universe soon.

Second, I adore the way you write Padme. It annoys me how many authors portray her as a weaker, almost clingy character. I've never encountered someone who wrote her the way I imagined her (as the strong and witty Padme) until I began reading your stories.

Third, the interaction you write between Anakin and Padme is very, very genuine and often humorous. Not many authors acknowledge that part of their relationship.

Lastly, (a kind of random thing to notice) I adore the way you write Yoda. Again, there are many authors who paint him as this stodgy, cagey, defensive old dude. Yet, you are able to show him to be truly wise and open to change, and maintaining that humor I think we all know he is capable of :)

So, thank you. Reading your stories is truly an enjoyable experience for me, and I look forward to more from you in the future. -Serena
dragonball256 8/18/11 . chapter 3
What a great story this was. I enjoy reading AU fics on episode III and this one was very well done.
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet 4/8/11 . chapter 3
Quote: Sola just about lost it laughing at that one. End quote.

I DID lose it laughing at that one. ;) You made that entirely (in my opinion) cheesy romance hilarious and entertaining. You also made it seem much more meaningful than I gathered from the show. :D Well done.
ebonyXivory777 3/22/11 . chapter 3
This is a cute and very nice ending for the Skywalkers. A lot of times people tried to make a different ending to the tragedy of ani and padme but this one is done very well.

I'm just wondering, it would be a lot of fun if you wrote a one- shot of anakin visiting Ryoo and Pooja's school like in the beginning. That would be a fun story to read
Timewatcher 2/22/11 . chapter 3
cool
PrettyAnimeKitty 2/20/11 . chapter 3
It's nice to see such a well-written "what if" story about these characters :) I hope you continue on with this AU world; its very...happy
Jedi Arwen Sparrow Winchester 8/14/10 . chapter 3
Awwwww I really love this story, especially Anakin's relationship with Pooja and Ryoo! Totally priceless cuteness...:D:D
SilkenPetal 1/22/09 . chapter 2
I loved this purely loved it. You are such an amazing star wars writer, simply wonderful. Please write more Anakin and Padme stories.
Julia Mars 12/6/08 . chapter 3
I really liked this whole story, but that play-by-play of who-seduced-who was marvelous. Great job.
Lilianne-Rachelle 4/11/08 . chapter 3
aw i really like this story!

i always hated the end of the revenge of the sith

i didnt like that anakin turned evil and padme died

i like this version much better )
Lalaith Quetzalli 3/27/08 . chapter 3
Oh Dear Force...Dear Spirits...Dear...Everything!

This is lovely!

You know, this is my kind of ending, the kind of ending I would have liked for the SW trilogy (yeah, unlikely to happen considering the traditional trilogy, but still).

It's wonderful!

I hope you've done some of those One-Shots. I especially would love to read about Anakin in Pooja's and Ryoo's school, that should be interesting enough. And Anakin's life with a new padawan (after all, they did say all the Masters would be taking a new padawan...).

Anyway, awesome fic.

I LOVED IT!
Mandylion 1/18/08 . chapter 3
I could sing your praises all day if you asked me to.

It was beautiful - as usual, and as expected. You've captured them in an utterly lovely way.
Padme52 10/19/07 . chapter 3
I loved your AU versions of this couple. This story is very well written and executed.

I enjoyed reading it immensely. After reading Scandalous I was curious and that led me here.

Great job.
Rogue15 9/10/07 . chapter 3
Personally I am surprised that this did not get more reviews. I enjoyed this take on the SW universe. A lot different then how things usually go.

Thanks,

Rogue
ibelieveintruelove 8/18/07 . chapter 3
Oh I love this story! It's so sweet and romantic; and I loved the last chapter because Anakin and Padme are so cute together and they have their adorable little arguments but at the same time are so in love with each other that they can take each other's breath away every time. Would you ever consider writing a sequel to this, one where Luke and Leia are older? You could even write just a follow-up one-shot to detail what else happened in their lives and to give your readers some lovely Anakin and Padme fluff.

Awesome story!
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