Reviews for Because of You

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Ritsikas 2008-08-14 ch 2,	abuseI´ll be sure to read the next chapter. I doo hope it will come out soon.
Wolf 2007-09-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseGotta say...this is much better than the previous version...its more realistic ne!?^_^ please update! when next you can...
Sakimi1014 2007-07-21 ch 2,	abusehallelujah! you finally updated! lol I thought this chapter was great and much better than your last. Please update soon!
NotSupposedToBeHere 2006-11-29 ch 1,	abuseI like it so far, so please continue. Update soon!
pinktears 2006-10-17 ch 1,	abuseI must say it's a little sad that you decided to redo after going so far, but I'm sure this will be better than the last! XP
StormyKate 2006-09-18 ch 1,	abuseI love this story! Please continue : )
Sakimi1014 2006-09-18 ch 1,	abuseawesome! hey! my prologue was shorter!
Itsuka.Yamazaki 2006-07-29 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely love the first chapter! ^_^ I hope that you get a "flood" of ideas soon, I look forward to more and reading the other chapters. This also somewhat reminded me of the Episode "Plan" XD thumbs up
Tears Of Hell 1428 2006-04-05 ch 5,	abuseGood job there! But just an ideia... you should write something about what they are thinking, about how Hikaru is feeling, and her thoughts. Her and everybody elses! The story is too static and distant, you should make things more important. Maybe the readers would love to know more about the characters personality, the personality you're giving! Imagine nobody had ever heard of the tv show,like me! lol and we would like to know more about them. That way you could give your story its originality and a more deep conection! So hope I'm not hurting any feelings, I'm just trying to help! I like this story! There aren't many of PMK, and OC ones even more scarce! So good luck and I'll be waiting anxiously for your update.
Lilth 2006-03-21 ch 5, anon.	abuseThis story is soo friggin awesome! Have no idea if you mind swearing or not but I was able to restrain myself, lol. You should update more often cause it's soo kewl and um this is sorta a cliffhanger well I think I know what's goin to happen. oh yeah um I'll offer you some ideas Hikaru meets Yoshida and um Ryoma and those freaky magic freaks, damn it mind blank. Oh and there's this episode dunno if you've watched it when there's this person who looks excatley the same as Soji and yeah she could get kidnapped by him and poor Soji gets sad Her past catches up with her near the end around about the time of the Ikedaya Incident. Um that's all I'm willing to write but I have more. Bye Byez
anaemicfaeries 2006-03-02 ch 5,	abuseGreat chapter! Glad you updated! Happy to read more of Hikaru's adventures in the Shinsengumi, lol. But ack, a cliffie!! Please update soon, gotta know if Hikaru is going to be ok! And tsk tsk for Okita, he's doing it again. I don't think Kondo and Hijikata will be too happy. (actually maybe Hijikata will...lol...)
charmed-sword 2006-02-26 ch 5,	abuseOh yay, you updated! Sque! ^_^ I enjoyed this chapter very much, Hikaru is just so likable and funny, and the way she quickly jumps to conclusions about everything...but she's also really nice, how she tried to protect Tetsu! Ek Hope she's okay...Great take on that episode by the way. Loved Hikaru's thoughts on Kondo. ^_^ Can't wait for more, the cliffie is killing me already! ^_^
shadow-5-girl 2006-02-26 ch 5,	abusePlease Update!Gr8 chapter!I luv the fanfic so keep up the good work. luv, shadow-5-girl
Blue kaze 2006-02-26 ch 5,	abuseokay, okay! i'm here to review finally! i'm really impressed! you sure did your homework. all of those names of the moves. i didn't even know half of it. but i feel like i've read this...oh wait yeah it's like that other peacemaker story we read...it sounds really similar...but i know the next chapter wil be different right? well anyways awesome! so you better update soon, ne? ~nat~
frog 2006-02-25 ch 5, anon.	abuseo.0; I really don't like how Hikaru distrusts men so much. If she does...why would she join the Shinsengumi? If she didn't like them so much, you'd think she'd avoid having to live with an entire organization of them...right? And when Shinpachi was looking at her chest and whatnot -- he wouldn't really be so rude and mean. Anyways, yeah, a lot of little irritants like that.

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