I love the friendly flirting game Max and Rachel had going on (hunter green!). Very nice, funny, heart-warming, and moving.

Cool. I really liked this. That was a really great method, doing it all in dialogue and you were vcry IC.

"So, what's a nice girl like you doing on a link like this?" - *Scarab cracks up laughing* classic! So very Max!

Nice story.

I loved it

want more

more

come on what happened next

Tres cool, my friend. Love the dialogue.

Way cool way cool but what happens next?

aaaaawwwwww!

Wow... Very much to my liking. I always thoought that underneath the hatred, there's some niceness between those two. Nice way to develop it.

loved it! Though you didn't leave much room for a continuation, you should write more like it!

OH MY GOSH ELLEN! LOL! Your experiment worked very nicely me thinks. The underwear comment and Max's response too it were HILARIOUS! *bows at the master's feet.* :)

*applause* Wonderful, but then again we expected no less, did we? I don't care what season it is, this was great. Umm... I guess you don't need to borrow any of my snow eh? Being Canadian occasionally sucks. *lesigh* Could I borrow some of your inspiration? Gah. Love this, love you, love my bed. Speaking of which... *runs to go for a nap, tossing chocolate rice krispie squares into the air*

Mmmm... I *liked* it. Great fic! The style was easy to follow and concise - we only get exactly what we need to get. VERY nice fic. You've successfully brightened an evening of dueling with a two-dimesional cricket (don't ask).

Awww...and it snowed in Ytown, too, so you're not alone with the Christmas-y thoughts. Good fic, even if bits of author poked through at times. :)

You told me about this, and I still love it! *grins* Was laughing through a few bits of it, hard enough for my friend to get worried. You did a great job on this, Ellen! Keep it up! Catch ya later! Luv ya all!

-Maxy Steel