this was so perfect. And the way you manage to write a fanfic about Rory and not have her in it, well not as a talking character anyway is brilliant.
The way you wrote Finn, Logan and Colin, perfect. and I loved that it was so dark.
the last sentence was heartbreaking and probably more close to reality than what happend in the show.

Sheer brilliance; that's the best way to describe this fabulous piece of writing.

This fic was bitter, but sweet - kind of like jely covered reality. It made you laugh with all the references, and then almost cry with the last line. It made you almost hate Logan, but then realize that Finn was just like that too, and that's just how they were.

It painted a portrait of Finn and Logan as more than just crappy characters that float around the show with no real use. You have this way of making the characters come to life, to mean something even if it isn't in a good way.

You used something from the show to make it realistic, but still made it original. Your writing is artistic and smart, and it flows. This is for sure something to be proud of, and you should definitely be grateful that you have the talent that few people do.

Perhaps if this was a reality show...
Then BOY am I glad that it isn't.

While well written, totally depressing. You put a damper on my 'alls-gonna-be-well, cuz-love-conquers-all' niavete and wishfullness.

True, at this point I am not much of a fan of Rory myself - but we watch for ENTERTAINMENT, not for sucky reality. So here's wishing that the directors turn Rory back into a sweet, moral, ethical and witty kid - WITH A SPINE. Oh, and bring Tristan back (dreamin's healthy).

It might still turn out to be a good season.

AMEN! yup that was a awesome piece of writing I love the darker more realistic spin you put to it...I agree she is stupid to listen to mitchem I think she should be a novelist and write about stars hollow...not a reporter...she's too sweet!,hm I may use that in a story...(plotting)

Interesting... in a good way...

Awesome. I loved the POV. This is so much more realastic than the other fics I read.

Very well writtn, awesome references, and you got the characters very accuratly.

I loved it. Nice work.

As I said, wonderfully dark story. Love the song...the title fits so well with the story. You're magnificent. :-*

Really dark, but I liked it. As much as I like Gilmore Girls, sometimes it's so unbearably happy. Different from your other works too; good to see you can do both dramatic and funny stories.

Fabulous job.

I'm not sure I liked that very much...it was very...wrong

Ouch. That hurt. It was written so well I almost forget that it sheds an incredibly negative light on almost all my favorite characters. I like this as a break from reality, it's very thought provoking and brutually honest. Great job.

Nice. Gotta say, I'm a fan of the Rory-bashing. Not that I cared for Rory before the Logan crap came up - I mostly ignored her then, but now I'm seriously disliking her, so I love this fic :)

Although I think you were too generous with a secretary job. I'd have gone for McDonald's drive-through or Wal-mart greeter ;)

Good stuff.

Yay! Logan got screwed, Rory got screwed and Finn got laid; my three favorite things in one story. I also love that you pointed out many of Rory's flaws _God, that voice. You know how much I hate that voice._ Plus, the lack of intellect and her insecurity.

Kudos and Buenos Noches,
Allie

Let's here it for the greatest Rory-bashing One-shot! haha And once more for Ali: who had the courage to write what we were ALL THINKING! lol

perfect, I'm so ** at Rory after tonights episode that I love how this ended.

Don't we all wish.