 Llamachick 2008-03-27 . chapter 1Sweet and hungry. Very good descriptions. ^/^ |
 PurePinkEtiquette 2006-10-16 . chapter 1liked your story x'D
You know, you should continue this one. It could be really nice to know what happened afterwards. I hope Envy came back... teehee ^^ I think he did. Yes x'D |
 myinukoi 2006-09-09 . chapter 1As soon as I was done reading the story I was so ready to review and IMMEDIATELY ask about the title that i almost skipped your authors note that read: "Don't you dare ask about the title. XDD"
So now I have to think of something else to review about...? Oh? What about the story...?
-Hits herself on head because of her own stupidity-
Anywho! I loved the story! It was beautiful. And all of the characters were OC, as OC as you can be in that situation as far as I'm concerened. But besides that, your ways of writing are beautiful and I'll shall be off now to find more EnvyxEd's (hopefully you have some more)...
Till another time or fic,
-reads title again; giggles-
-MIK |
 Freedom Fighter Nixxy 2006-01-29 . chapter 1God is so friggin' pleased XD
CHicken Finger!love! Happy Happy...Baley, your writing owns my soul...
Envy Ed loving |
 xiia 2005-11-08 . chapter 1That would never happen... I'm sorry. |
 Mercedes no Inuarai 2005-10-11 . chapter 1For the title ALONE I hadtoread this fic. XD Not to mention, I'm doing character research on Envy for an RP and this fic fits the bill perfectly on how I'd like to play him. ^.^ Twisted and not really sane; enjoys playing with others emotions and minds because he's so much better than them. ^.^ Heh, great fic. |
 flame gazer 2005-09-26 . chapter 1AAH! i loved it!!
~tiff |
 Tinted Amber 2005-09-17 . chapter 1xD YEY Chicken fingers! That's so awesome =D Good job |
 SFA (too tired to login) 2005-09-13 . chapter 1 Brilliant. That's the only word I can think of to describe what you have done here.. I was already fond of the Envy/Ed pairing but this is very interesting... You've done very well with the characterization. This is high quality material you've given us. And The title... It's so out there, especially when it's an ANGST fic that the reader just feels compelled to give it a peek. Great job! I'll be back for more so update soon! (Don't follow my example and not update for 5 months at a time) |
 Bourei no Hikari 2005-09-13 . chapter 1...Damn it, now I want to ask about the title. -twitch-
Erm...let's see.
This is the first time I've read Envy/Ed after deciding that the pairing might be kind of cool, and you've gone and made it into my new favorite pairing.
The creepiness owns my soul, and I love your mini Ed/Al-ness, even though it wasn't really Al.
I must just generally fangirl over this and favelove it forever. |