>>You keep me in the lifestyle I’m accustomed to, or better

I.e. she will not work and will not do any chores. Some wife she will be.

I definitely like the idea of this story, Ranma with a business like mind, CHOOSING Nabiki over the other two sisters, and it's Ranma and Nabiki who could want for more.

However, it also feels like the chapters are a little rushed. Chapter 1 was fine, but that was it. The rest just seemed to shove the story along and not let it show it's full potential. And I believe this story has a lot of potential in it if it were only allowed to breathe more.

I do however, still look forward to the updates and will continue to read through to the end.

Please come back to this!

Good story
Wish there was more.

I read the beginning of this fanfic a long time ago. I liked it then and I like it now. I hope you plan to keep this up. It's good.

update soon

good! update soon plz

Like it. Whats gonna happen next?

Good story. But she shouldn't be here yet, shouldn't Kodachi have shown up first?

opstical? I don't know what that is, but it better run if Xian Pu wants it dead.

Anywho, keep up the writing ^^

How does shampoo know about the cruse? are you going to explain this in the next chapter?

GREAT CHAPTER!

keep on typing and ill keep on reading

*coughkillshampoocough*
plz update soon ^_^

While this update was nice concept-wise, it has many glaring spelling errors. I strongly suggest you run it through a word processor with a spell checker. Having a beta reader to proof read the story might not be a bad idea either, as there were a couple of glaring grammar and capitalization errors as well, and lord knows that if _I_ can spot them, there were probably more.

I give it a technical score of 3.1, but a 9.6 for artistic impression.