Cute, Chickie.

Aw, thats so cute! Go for it, Zell!

How sweet! :) Actually, it's far deeper than simply "sweet"-it's great how you write of how love can give hope to the bleakest situation without preaching at all. It was nice to see a different side to the often shorcharged Zell, yet he's right in character from beginning to end. His thoughts are all too real, and so sympathetic. And I loved Zell's banging pots and pans to wake Ma up when he needed to talk to her. That's so quintessentially Zell! :D Zell and the girl's attraction is naturally and realistically handled, and his not finding out her name was a nice ironic touch. What a great story.

Wow. What else can I say? You captured Zell's personality so beautifully. You are truly talented. Good work.

Z - that was wonderful, some parts of it beautiful. I thought you captured Zell completely and added further insight into him. I particuluarly loved all the first part when it was just him - you do that so well. And the last part made me cry - that's tears down the cheek. I'm just a big softie and I have a giant soft spot for Zell anyway. I've been wanting to read this since I first saw your profile page but I was always reading something else of yours instead and I decided today to read it and I certainly wasn't disappointed. This was awesome. Great job.

Oh, this is really cute! I've never seen it done like this before. Of course, I don't usually read the Zell/library girl deals. But this is pretty good. I like it a lot! Good job! _

That is sooo cute! _

Argh... I don't know what else to say... You've got talent! Keep writing this kind of adorable stories! _

Woah! You have a gift. I have no idea what the heck she was trying to say! But woah you like interpreted every WORD! I bet thats what they were trying to make them say, too! Wow your really good. Thats so cool! SOrry, Im prolly being annoying. Thats sooooo neat tho!

Well done, and really cute. Loved it. - 'let go of my leg'? LOL _

Aw! This's real sweet! A great piecing together of those meager bits of words! Cute lil' ficcy!

That was really cool fic_

that's so endearing! was this inspired by the goo goo dolls, by any chance? *suspicious* i'm sure rainey loved this story to death. do we ever find out the name of the girl in another fic? hmm?

Sweet!

WAHH! THis story's soooo cute!(_)

Cool. Speaking of cool that's what I need right now. It must be a million degrees here. Hey, no more dress! I burned it! HAHAHAHAHA! Sorry. I like it, it was...dare I say, cute? ) (I. Am. So. Messed.)