 Hammerchuckery 11/8/11 . chapter 1Yuffie would be 11-ish around this time. Eh. |
 Naidrag 3/31/11 . chapter 12 I would love to read the end of it, please finish it. |
 Miss Butterbeer 6/19/10 . chapter 12Whoooa,
I hope Yuffie's gonna be alright, considering she's gonna be surrounded by.. erm... "ones that swing that WAY", lol
And ... umm, may I suggest that you.. could possibly type until the edge of the page? I mean, you stopped typing in the middle of the page and start typing on a new line, for example:
mr-fable's abcdef.
most other's abcdefghijklmnop
I'm curious as to why it is typed that way... I mean, the way you types for the first chapter was until the edge.. and yet you stoped typing tha way for the rest of the chapters... I think it'll be more comfortable for some of your audience to read.. if you were to type your story until the edge of the page..
Please don't take this as an offense! I was just suggesting.. that's all :)
Anyway, good luck for finishing the next chapter! :D |
 Yurein Kisaragi 4/24/10 . chapter 12 alrigth...its been more then a year -siting on a shair waiting- hope you are okay Mr-Fable and please do update.Take care. |
 MinaDeville 10/3/09 . chapter 12GAH! Please continue! I love this story T_T |
 MinnieMouse8990 6/8/09 . chapter 12this story is so friggin awesome. i'm like depressed that it has a 90% chance of never being updated again. |
 LiveLifeLikeNeverBefore 5/30/09 . chapter 12You must continue I adore this story to all lengths of time!
Luv from a Mutt. |
 Bird 4/21/09 . chapter 12 Eh, cute. Would be interested in seeing how this changed the rest of the cast. But if it's dead, its dead. |
 Yurein Kisaragi 8/1/08 . chapter 12 Mr-Fable...it almost bean a year! when are you gonna up date?-crys- T-T i wanna know what happens next! pls! |
 Kichou 8/1/08 . chapter 12I do hope that you will update this fic again. It's great. I love it. |
 lonelyassassin 7/6/08 . chapter 3 Sephiroth read the dictionary? Weird. But seriously, I like it. |
 Kuon 4/21/08 . chapter 12Love this fic and hope you continue it ] |
 Yurein Kisaragi 1/27/08 . chapter 12 Hai! hai! I agre with Setana San, onegai up date! |
 Setana 1/26/08 . chapter 12 I feel I must point out that the preceding page is people begging for more, you might want to give your obviously large audience what it wants. |
 Yurein Kisaragi 1/25/08 . chapter 12 onegai! up load pls pls pls pls! -crys- |