Please update! I love this story.

Darn you. Finish this FanFic, I love where it's going.

Lovely. :) Really, it is. I love the big family, I love how there were other deaths to balance out Lotte living and I adore the characters you've developed.

Do continue! This is, in my opinion, the best story here. :)

-Alone Dreaming

I like it! Interesting to bring in the other brothers! :) I never thought of doing it really, considering they weren't mentioned in the movie. :) Lovely though, lovely.

The only thing I think is that Lotte ought to be dead. She died in the movie after all and since this is movie universe... It just seemed to be one of the biggest tensions between Jake and Will. It was important. :) That's the only reason I bring it up. Your story, your rules!

I'd like to see more if you want to post more! :) Please?

-Alone Dreaming