Well as if I wasn't hooked before now I'm very anxiously awaiting more. Love the idea of John figuring out about the baby and not being able to say.. very sweet.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Only tiny thing (no one but me would notice). Kinda confused as to what INL's doing on the investigation... I interned with INL and it's not exactly their jurisdiction. It fits with the show cannon, though, so that's really all that matters. (Yeah, okay, people are coming back from the dead and I'm concerned about jurisdiction... I'll stop now before I embarass myself further)

hehehe--I wish I could have read the scene where John tricks Bo into telling him the truth. But I'm glad that John knows and hope he hurries up and get's Carlo before it's too late.

oh please don't leave us in suspense! Update soon!(even though you just did) lol

LongLiveJolie!

~JustAnotherRegret~

Aww, a baby. I feel so bad for my poor jolie. I love that Mikey's being a good uncle already. I can't wait for John and Natalie to see each other.

PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!

I heart Todd. :) And John--sigh--I do hope you keep him safe--now a small scuffle would be ok, but nothing too horrendous. LOL--Sorry, I know I'm being crazy this morning. Whenever you are up to it I will gladly take another chapter.

Seems like a pretty solid plan. Now I have a feeling that something is going to go wrong.

hehehe--Here, let me give your muse a little more strength. I love the chapter--again, I'm loving this dialouge between Todd and Natalie. I do think Natalie needs to visit John though I'm sure he'll say no--he doesn't want visitors.

Ilove how you're bringing Todd into the story. He and Nat have an interesting relationship to say the least. I feel so bad for my poor Jolie, I hope you fix them.

that last scene got me all weepy. I'm sure Natalie will figure something out--and interesting how you're pulling Todd into this, just a little bit.

Nice start! Very interested to see where this goes. I hope you can maintain this intensity throughout. Ruminations of things to come... that lack of protection thing seemed kinda significant. Hmm...

Wow, that's one hell of a start. I can't wait to find out what happened and how Jolie go to this place. I hope they find a way to be together.

E! You have a new story! YAY! You just made my night darling, and hopefully in a few minutes I'll have something for you to read.

Can't wait to see what your muse brings us to read. :)