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A Lone Black Rose
2008-06-29 . chapter 1
Very nice story. I agree w/ the "Obi-wan is the 'perfect jedi'" thing. He really does seem it at times
XANl
2008-03-01 . chapter 1
I would love to see a part two, when Obi Wan is a knight and listens to Revan's advice.
Lady Tragic
2007-10-20 . chapter 1
I loved it. I would have made it Qui-gon though- he was always the one to buck the Council's authority, and perhaps he remembered the advice from when he was.

~Tragic
(Ain't I just?)
CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
oh this was great! ! !
Darth Phex
2006-02-12 . chapter 1
I will never look at boxes the same way again. loved it! good job!
DarthNexus9000
2005-12-22 . chapter 1
Good Oneshot
Anonymous-cat
2005-09-16 . chapter 1
That was a truly inspired idea. I always wondered what happened with that box. Great fic!
Amber Penglass
2005-09-15 . chapter 1
Excellent. Utterly excellent. This would make a beautiful premise for a full-fledged fic...

My only thing (and this is hilarious since you just corrected me on the time length of the Exile's exile...), but I believe it was only a thousand years between the events of Kotor and Episode I. In Episode I, Mace Windu tells Qui-Gon that the Sith haven't been seen in a millennia, and since we have no evidence that the Sith returned after the exile destroyed them, I would assume to sticking to the one millennia..

Oh, drat, wait, but then there's the 'what if' of if you played a darkside character, then that could have kept the sith going for who knows how long... Ack, all right, ignore me.

Still a wonderful piece. ^_^
shellythenerd
2005-09-15 . chapter 1
I told you that I loved this one over on KFM, and I will say it ere too. Great Job RPD!
Trillian4210
2005-09-14 . chapter 1
I liked it very much. I think you crafted some excellent ideas and sentences that will only get stronger and more clearer with time. Well done!
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